I've seen you improved send me a 8 or 16 sometime bro

Yeah ima get at it this weekend brah

i got the beat aint started my bars yet , so i just start and go for 1 minute? then give it to danjer to mess with? i think thats how he wants to do it.

Yea it did not seem do work for me

When u get time can u send me the beat the eminem one? Because I dont got it.

Personally? I think you killed him. We'll see how the votes go, though.

it's ait i'll send you an 8 disregard the one i sent ya for now...

get that 16 i sent ya bruh

The rating I gave you was fair. I just PMed you a full breakdown of your verse.

PEEP THIS TRACK IF YA GET A MIN THANKS

nahh it wasnt that bad im just an incredibly harsh voter .. i dont even think ive givin out a 9 in my time in the fvc LOL... either way keep working and the idea of my ratings is that when i vote again you can see your improvement

Til I Collapse? I'll COLLAPSE YOU, my rhymes are so backwards, I'll have you thinkin' I'm a BLACK DUDE.

Sounds good to me. Let me do the next one at home though so I can actually have a GOOD quality...But I work more than I stay at home, so if I am feeling it, I will just have to drop at the office...I wish I could figure out how to get better quality with a beat. IF WE COULLD UPLOAD the fucking beat I could use the plug-in mic...But we can't upload the beat (well, I can't) so it won't work for me...

I'll send soon, maybe Friday or Saturday.

Man, whoever sends always has less advantage, so that is how it goes...That is the first time I have done a freestyle in awhile (vocal) I like writtens like you...But dude, who cares who wins, I'll send the next one either way =) it is about fun, elevation, and getting shit right...We both will learn and it's good like that! good luck man! I did get lucky in the middle though with that fast part...and that "Dick in your throat" line was fucked up...LOL but it's fun man, (not dicks in throats...unless it's a hot chick)

Thanks bro that means a lot! I did rhyme in the middle of my verse though with PALL RAISING ARMS? PLEASE - SALVATION ARMY.

I'm old skool fam...Same beat, same rules...No handicap (unless you in a wheelchair)...2 minutes sounds good. =)

Oh! Also in that SAME battle, in the final round...He used the line "You wacker than the motherfucker that you bit yo' style from. You couldn't press two copies if you sold a double album" (same song as the line I posted below) *Brain Damage* < but he freestyled the rest after that line...But dude, those lines killed it for that Honkey ass Idol of mine (but he did not get me started in hip-hop...He just made me realize that white dues could do it too...Marky Mark didn't make me think that tho, LOL! I hated Marky Mark, but loved his videos...I prefer him as an actor... - Why the fuck am I talking so much?

I'm down for that for sure man! NO WRITTENS! I know it can be hard for even the best artists...But don't even try to think of your rhymebook (I know you have one..lol) Speaking of Eminem, in his freestyles that got him signed to interscope, he "freestyled" the line *They call me Slim Shady, I'm braindead like Jim Brady, I'm 'a M-80, you little like that Kim ady" << Think of that..He later released it on MMLP*** So he obviously had that from his rhyme book and used it...WE ALL do that - I have not done enough audios for that on here, but let's make that a rule. =P

You send it. Your choice...BUT let's try to keep "comedic but insulting"....No specific topic, but let's try to put on a good show...I WANT 32, but these assholes don't read the shit...Maybe we will get lucky and FVC will get on it...Will you send? I have "sent" my last 5 beef battles by others choice. Will you open? I know that gives me an edge to flip, but you are fucking difficult to flip, lol...So it should be a good battle. I am DOWN for a 284 if you want, SEND IT BRO!!! (by the way, I am getting a LOT of hate votes...I got a message from someone saying that people are teaming against me to make sure I stay off top ten...Some bullshit man..) So go as hard as you can (that's what she said) and I will do the same. If you REALLY want me to send, let me know..There is a coin toss app that I made...We can do it that way. What you think?

Saxx think about signing up to this. Would love to see you participate.
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