Cohesive throughout *

I think lock got that. His bar was more cohesive thorough with the word plays leading up to the punch. You probably would’ve done better if you didn’t have 2 separate angles. Also I think it should’ve read ‘and not get jumped’ instead of ‘a not get jumped’ ac bars gotta be really well done to be effective since so many people have used them, probably should’ve just went with the 2nd punch and made it stronger with wordplays during the first half.. checkered past.. could’ve added something like odds stacked up against you, something about lumberjack.. just off the top of my head but you get what I’m saying.

https://www.letsbeef.com/tournament_...196&section=tb

I think I got robbed, What’s your thoughts honestly? Tead some of the bogus comments of some of those who voted against me.