No worries mate!

There's nothin' wrong wi' shootin etc of it's done in an interestin way but you've ya whole imagination to use to kill someone so why not go to town! As long as it makes sense to the reader!

I heard you had exams all the best wi em mate!

Cheers!

Haha thanks bro.I kinda use stab and shoot alot in my battles lol. Anyways bro I'll be asking for feedback and I'll try to practice hard after I'm done with exams.Thanks for your support alot bro.

Cheers mate!

Keep practicin and ask people on where you can improve then go away and practice what they've said!

There's no Hip Hop scene where I live so studied h
Rap tracks, listenin to how they rhyme and flow, then I wrote and wrote and wrote! I've a box of pads wi lyrics on! Even if it's one line I wrote it and never scribbled anythin out as it might work somewhere else!

Think of an unusual way of sayin' summit.

In a battle u can kill your opponent in anyway you like so you don't have to shoot or stab 'em

eg. The last line in our battle I said I broke the bath in the Bates Motel so you had to use the shower. In the film Psycho a woman gets stabbed to death in the shower whilst at the Bates Motel so I wa sayin I gave you no choice but to get killed in the shower. It's a famous scene so hopefully people got it.

Keep practicin and chase up every low score to get feedback!

Cheers!

Thanks alot for your support man.I really apprecite it.And I ain't that good lol I'am still improving and bro what I meant I get sad when I get 4 or 5 it because it make me feel like I'm not improving and I'm practicing for nothing.Anyways bro thanks alot you really made me feel good about my self and Good luck in the tourny

I appreciate that thanks! 4 and 5s do seem low but like I said it's all subjective!

On the flip side of it I was voted 10 before and thought that wa high for the verse
I dropped!

You've made me feel very old, readin ya verse I'd have had you down as older! I wish I could've rapped as good as you at 13! I certainly wouldn't worry about the votes then!

This site's full of experienced rappers so don't be afraid to ask them for advice! I have, just grow some thick skin to take any criticism and listen to what they say and if you don't understand ask em to explain!

Remember, nothing's personal on the site. People don't know you and all they have on you is a rap verse so that is all they're commenting on!

Don't get downbeat, keep writin, listening to advice and learn as much as you can at school as that's where the clever lines comes from (not from just listening to rap) and you my friend will be unstoppable as you're already pretty damn good

Cheers!

Thanks alot man.And yeah good battle I won't be down but it like I didn't think We deserve 4 and 5 but it's alright I'm still 13 years old and I don't have experience in rapping.Anyways good battle bro and your a very good rapper and I really loved your verse.

Don't put yourself down! I think people may have voted low as its a tourney but havin said that the voting system is totally down to the user eg. One man's 4 is another man's 8!

They have voted low but don't take it to heart, why not ask some of em nicely to give ya a bit more clarity on why they voted as to get some feedback.

I always try and grab as much feedback as I can as that's how I can improve.

Don't put yourself down you came back wi a hard verse that impressed me first time and you've really improved! I'm limited to what advice I can give as I'm still learning but i'd cause what feedback you can get!

Good work and good battle!

Good battle bro I liked your verse but it kinda sucks that people putted 4 and 5 rate for us...that's piss me off I know I wasn't good but u desvered a 8

send me a battle again that one is gliched...use ur same verse

My bad! I got two tourneys mixed up! Sorry!

Only one day to drop a reply in the tourney!

Go for if mate!

All the best wi' the tourney by the way! As always, no hate intended on the battle!

Cheers.

Sent the 8 mate!

bro send me 8 lines so we start the tourny.