I could feel that though, when you enunciate words differently they can work and it can be considered a ''slanted rhyme'' and make the multiple syllable rhyme scheme work just fine, so I can see where you're coming from. Probably not the best idea for text though lol. S'all good my guy.

BTW if you're bored check out a couple of my latest cyphers. I promise they're fire.

okay cool, i'd join ur crew in order to grow as an emcee and get a feel for how things work on this site. And I know what you mean, but I bent the word 'fuck' to make it rhyme with the rest.. The 'uck' sound was made 'ock'.. I do that alot when I flow, but yeah it probably isnt functional in text...

*reads comments*

I'm not going to speak on all that because IDK the situation. I will say that I know this site won't make you rich or famous, but I do hope you take it serious. Because when you rap as hard as you can that's the only way you can get better, and reading other emcees material, studying their styles/ideas/concepts, (even if they're weaker than you) you can also learn that way, and you will then elevate as well...

ANYway, we just battled, and I SEE potential in you man.

Multie set you used: Stop-Sign, Got-Time, Cock-Guy, and randomly in there you SCREWED UP the multie scheme by saying ''fucked mind''.. the MIND rhymed, but ''fucked'' doesn't rhyme with stop-got-cock, therefore the multie scheme is screwed up completely.

Hope you understand what I mean and if you need more lessons , message me.

I think you'd be an excellent rookie and a great future asset to my crew if your attitude is right and you're willing to learn.

Holla @ me hommie.