Some feedback would be appreciated: http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showt...d=1#post740579 (diss cypher)

Good battle man. Congrats on the win. One day, u will lose ur streak...LOL

Yo, just waiting for reply man...

sent it thru

nvr. i would feel wack doing that shit. btw, sry for bashing at u and shit...

well...u did say that i didnt deserve to talk cuz of my record...and i wanna send u 8 cuz i wanna send u 8...

and guess what, i got more wins than losses bitch.

hey, Xspiltdicks can i send u an 8?

Haha the bitch has a vagina...

Haaaaa ur blinded by ur ranks man. Were not all the same. We improve at different rates. Who knows, maybe one day I'll be ranked 1 in here. I'll tear ur skin off ur body and pussy and use it to paint raps. Think 'fore u say shit, aight? Matter of fact, I wanna see if I improved. Sent me 8, motherfucker

Haaaaaa ur blinded by ur ranks man. Everyone improves at a different rate. Were not all the same. Were different. And who knows, maybe one day I'll be ranked 1 in here. I'll tear ur skin off ur body and pussy and use it as a canvas to do my artwork of rap. So think before u say shit, aight?

Look bitch, I'm improving and I can say whatever the fuck I want. Good thing u left cuz we deserve better members who don't bitch over a leader spot. Good luck with that other shitty crew...

Stop bitchin' homie...u sound like a fuckin' brat...what matters is that u were part of the crew

aight. can u show me how to make it more complex?

Yea...I felt like that battle with Rami didn't make sense either.