first of it's amazing that you take feedbacks so graciously something which speaks volumes about your skills and charactar both coz thats what keeps one ticking and allows on to keep getting better. your style is very acapella specific which half the folks here do not have but the text game is what has made letsbeef letsbeef for all these years, yeah prolly one punch every two lines with hard hitting set ups and metaphors should be more than enough and in your case that should be enough since you already know how to frame punches. look forward to your better text battles man, godspeed !

Yeah the sewing machine bar was good lol I lol’d like damn I like that one. N good look on the expo. My set ups are too long n a few other things like that. That’s kinda what I was thinking. I’m trying to learn how to write more intricate then I’ll go back n clean up the length n shit. I just rap n talk fast asf so I naturally say a lot of syllables.