I offer you a place on braggin writes if your down?

last time i checked i didnt use huge multis and i still ripped ya ass.

Btw you can't diss my style. You try to do huge multies and it fucks up your flow and makes your verse hard to read. Punches are unoriginal as well. Send the battle and shut the fuck up and I'll rip your ass...

You send ME lines. I'll reply QUICK, to make it on the 'recent' list. I'll show you I'll get all the vet votes lol.

only saw it the day you sent it... Ask the vets if your so smart.. Theyll all tell you I won. Your styles boring bro...

You got the W because you waited MONTHS to reply. No moderators or vets got to view it. It was on YOUR page, so when people found it, they most likely scrolled on YOUR page. If it was on the 'recent battles list' or if they seen it on my page as well, you know damn well that would of been my W lol.

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...855&section=tb

i got the W fair and square. So just squash any personal beef you got with me. Man up and dont let your ego get the best of u

Hey atel buddy Ill reply to your verse now. Ok man

its difficult to craft an appealing style in text.
Maybe you'll have more luck in audio..

And btw, sense you and I were bigger/older friends than most the peeps on this site, is the reason I was wanting to ask you, in PM's lol, aint tryna air the shit out, nahmean. Hit me up if you need something as well. And btw I'm getting a mic soon, so we should collab on an audio cypher or somethin.

That's what I was thinking. Maybe I'm wording it wrong. I know my punches/lines were better, I know I have the INTELLIGENCE to go to the top, just don't know how to DELIVER it correctly...

your verse was good but it lacked swag. It had nice punches etc!!! But it lacked the wow factor. Somethings wrong with your style bro

Why? where did I go wrong in my verse is what I'm trying to ask you lol.

mmm naturill smashed you bro

hard to pin point where exactly. bet when you write your bars. you think it looks dope. then u put it all together and it comes out a bit basic in places.
just a few tweaks needed to take u up a level

Its ok bro, thanks for the honesty.

Could I get an example?

dont take offense by that

your problem is what you do is perfected. there are no faults to the way you word your shit.

You just lack origionality and sometimes your stuff comes off basic as fuck.
you need to re construct your style

Agreed and understood.

Thing about it though, I see you're actually molding in well here, even in VETS eyes. For some reason, lots of people don't consider me a top notch vet. I'm not sure if it's my style that's different, if my concepts aren't complex or original enough.

I honestly am one of the best, but what I figured out is, I just don't appeal to the people, or at least not the veteran people. That's what I need help with, to re-word my shit, or get a new style, to open up vets eyes, and maybe you were made to teach that.

Mastering different styles is always a good thing.

we are completely different people
with completely different styles which is why we argue all the time... but imma put it all behind me... we only here to improve right? not argue