Well the expo u sent was retarded, cuz i expo'd everything u sent in the post above it, like i said, u have no bizness on any site, u should do us all a favor an cut ur own throat- and ill send u 16 when i have time- like i said, im on some realer shit so ill get to u whn i get to u, and looks like 2 other peopl agree with me so far bein im up 2-0

i sent u a long expo faggot on ur battle hope u enjoy it...send me 16 bitchass

Ummm still u havr not pointed out wat is forced, id love to hear it, u still dont grasp the concept of multis, or rhyme scheme, this is hilarious, i think ur critiqueing ur own verse

None of my shit is forced...matter of fact let's say ur "rhyming is forced"...it's all fckin weird and shit...a mentor against his apprentice lolol...

Lol go back and re read it, judging from ur verse i see why u wouldnt understand it, almost all of ur shit is forced, u havnt elevated 1 bit since u firststarted showin improvement , "PART OF A BASKET" seriously kid, and the whole batman, combat, cumbat, u need to get off EM's nuts dude-

BAHAHAHAHA!!! nigga, half ya shit didn't rhyme and ur just basically rhyming just to rhyme smh...

Ummmm sent, an u woulda had good personals if ya had better structure, u worded shit all wrong, used alot of filler, had some really wack shit dopped in there also, but GOOD FAIL tho-

Sent...I had some good personals to use...

U will see soon enough young sky walker-

U will see tha improvement soon enough...lol what's more realer than LB

Ummmm istill dont see tha improvement homie, n no i dropped that site, im on some real shit now-

LMFAO!!! I doubt it...ive been improving...so shouldn't u be moderating chat box? Lmao...

Good i see that got ya attention- u know imma punch ur soul so hard in this battle, that ur subconscious hides in a corner holdin a teddy bear, screamin fuck me!!!

Good i see that got ya attention-

Hold the fuck up homie I'll have it by tomorrow...bitchin and shit...smh...

Lol im all but scared kiddo- just send tha shit an quit talkin, u startin to get on my fuckin nerves, if u not gonna send it, stop clutterin up my page-

You scared homie?

An who u gettin psyche wit? U need to simmer down-

Lol, send it dude, im too busy to worry bout pointless battles- u challenging-

Nigga, just send 16