Thanks for mentioning that to me i will defenially try that

Well, if you want a little tip: Try expanding your rhyme schemes.

Instead of one word like (KNIFE ... WIFE ... LIFE)

Try two words together

I'll HIT JAWS with my BIG PAWS... murder your wifey, wait 3 days then stick my dick in that STIFF WHORE.

When i first started rapping, i sucked, when i came here, i really sucked, but i don't give up

Oh. I thought you actually thought you were good, like most of the whack people.

Takes balls to admit it, well done.

I know, i know, thanks for looking out for me if you want to be my bodyguard thats fine, and i know i suck. and i am fucking terrible

Looking out for you dude. I'm sorry that you're so terrible.

Dude, i am not going to give up, if i was going to give up, i would have gave up when i first started so shut the fuck up

Good luck