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Text Cypher
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"Outside View"

MadVerbs
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Cypher started: May 8th 2019 at 12:34



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Thought this was a very moving and excellently carried-out cypher. Some deep thoughts here, and I thought the narrative element from each family-member's perspective was very well-done and effective. The rhyming was also really fluid and natural and in my head at least the flow was fantastic. I don't like giving out 10s so I spent a long time trying to find something with which to justify a nine but it got to the point where I was trying to dislike something that I really liked, which means I think its pretty fair to give this a 10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-05-08 12:43:48 Private Message Kiwi Peewee


 

 
  Member Comments


yo thats deep man, true struggle about the hood life and you really put the rap and poetics in this verse creativley, its like i feel it more than just reading it. amazing flow man. fairs.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-05-10 01:58:26 Private Message CredblyDeadlySnypa


This shit right here 100. Felt every bar. The content is just astounding and your flow was crisp. You dimed this drop right here. ~PUN-ISH~
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-05-10 22:15:18 Private Message Uttirmost


I can see the nipsey influence in this, this was very dope and captures the idea of the cycle. I lost my brother to street b.s so this really hits home, its dope to see somethin like this rather than the typical rappity rap shit around here. Refreshing read, you got a real talent for this shit.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-05-10 22:23:05 Private Message Kompz


this had tupac written all over it man!! dayum!!loved the whole read you should put it to a beat and justify the write bro! wait put it on the headhunter's track :D
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-11 00:37:48 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


agreed with nickel bout recordin this technically strong as and hard hittin i defo think its worthy of makin a track
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-11 16:49:39 Private Message Ginge


There's been a million cyphers like this, talking about the struggles life in the hood. This one isn't anything fresh in that regard. But I still liked it... it's a nicely written piece. I don't know if it's "straight from the heart" or not, but it's definitely solid as far as lyrics go, and it paints some nice imagery too.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2019-05-12 00:52:20 Private Message Shodan


It was good you should make it longer and record it.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-14 15:49:18 Private Message -RED-BARON-


Nice
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2019-05-15 05:32:12 Private Message TP aka Porker


I thought this was a lot better than most "struggle" pieces. Well written scheming with good direction in terms of moving the theme along. Good stuff.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-15 06:11:31 Private Message Edgeworth


Definately had that i been thru it vibe. Im feeling the gritty nature of this drop has a real feal to it thats relatable on multiple fronts. Schemin was real nice very smooth and fluid substance is there and it read well nice work burdens keeo it up💯
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-15 17:30:42 Private Message ALL-BORO


Deep drop, good flow and great storyline. Could have had a bit better ending if you added a punch to it. 9
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-05-24 11:31:59 Private Message Celsius


I enjoyed that, gotta stay on that grind against those that plot on our lives, head up verse sick, keep standing.....UP!!!
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2019-06-24 16:21:42 Private Message ContagiousZ

 

 

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