this was pretty nice bro, try doing tracks. When you record dont have the recording volume soo high, and stand about 6 inches from the mic atleast.
with the drop, i thought you picked it up about 20 seconds in, first part of it you were off beat a lil but if this was a LB beat then sometimes they be off beat by themselves. Try to focus on that, and keeping a consistent flow, but your Bars ARE DOPE AF... thats why you lod, like the lyrical ability you have. A little more heavier punches in your battles would be dope like a better creativity level, maybe watch some Pat Stay, but other than that, your golden bro solid 9. keep up the good work 1
Posted on: 2018-12-17 00:17:00