My bad bro, completely forgot about this. I’ll come back to this later tonight and give the best feed back I can. 

Captivating piece. Flows was brillaint. Storry telling aspects is great too. You have moments where the transition for once scene to the other are fluid and then some that are abrupt which takes away from the 'reading flow' of the piece. Though overall, dope. I lookfoward to the next part. 

Nicely used line: "over cents they were killing off a bond."

It really reminds me of an Eminem song in some sort of way. I really fucked with this cypher man good shit. Tbh this should be taken and used for an actual song. On some real shit. Everything about this was grealy done as it told its story which was like a movie playing inside of my mind. 

i was avoiding dropping a feed here coz i was waiting to be in the right state f mind to be able to really absorb this and be able to articulate my thoughts about it at the same time. 

honestly this one really cements your legacyas the best cypher head on this site and with good reasons too. the whole verse had my attention captivated throughout with some seriously smooth wording and lucid multis an art which you are known for. amazing stuff man the part after ou got off the plane was dope !!

Good shit fam, you need to hit a track.

This was pretty dope and might be the best I've read from you. The flow was consistent throughout, the storytelling was dope. It was visual and you captured a lot of the emotion of someone going through it. Good job! 

The poetic value here is top notch. You really have a future with this shit.