lol this kinda sounded like a cypher, but most punches were okay imo, just wording and some repetitiveness let you down ...
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2018-01-11 17:58:22

It was a dope drop. Would've been a dope battle. I think my opponent flaked too. Hopefully I get the chance to post my verse as well. It was "name flip" heavy, so it can't use it on literally anyone else. Either way, dope drop.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2018-01-11 21:53:02

Thanks @Apache. Just post a cypher like I did. For some reason my 16 from the tournament is only 11 lines in cypher format

Posted on: 2018-01-12 06:51:13

Dope drop man. Stepping up from what you post in the basic league few misses but overall a nice drop. It’s a shame he no showed could of been a heater for sure!
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2018-01-13 16:32:53

I oughta study this shit lol
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2018-01-14 12:34:32

Appreciate the shout out. I feel like a few metaphors just didn’t connect here. Also the double meaning attempt you took was forced but overall you are getting better
Rated: 5

Posted on: 2018-01-25 15:39:16

neat
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2018-11-13 22:42:41

Nice bars man
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2019-06-21 13:40:27

Really decent material here man. However I concur with KG's opinion that this was more cypher-oriented but none-the-less you absolutely made this a cypher indeed.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2019-10-30 04:13:15

yeah i dig this cypher bnas it really expands ur creativity i think, t steel curtain line was hot. Dope drop bro.

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Should've replied to this, this was nice. Few things I didn't get: Tommy/Leaf by the trash line, didn't get who Tommy was/is. Steel Curtain bar, I get the implication but what's kraft?

l0l

You always end with some Friday the 13th ish that send chills down my spline. 💯

a solid 8

Not your best work, shit's pretty bad actually. Is that a diss or were you writing a fuckin love letter to him? You have respect for him? Great, keep it to yourself if you put that shit in a diss track it switches from a diss to a love song.

And what's that gay line about lobsters? Did your crabs get bigger over the years? Basic ass rhymes with "steel curtain" and "real certain". Not impressed at all.