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I actually enjoyed writing this and its all from the heart if you read it comment on what you think...Peace
Posted on: 2014-01-23 08:01:45 
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And if any criticism will be appreciated always helps to improve...No Hating Tho
Posted on: 2014-01-23 08:30:58 
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Not bad. Rhyming was pretty basic. If you have any questions or need tips don't hesitate. /1
Rated: 6 Posted on: 2014-01-23 09:15:16 
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Started well, went off in the middle cos it seemed you were rambling random words and then got really good again at the end. Im not huge fans of either to be honest so im commenting more in the verse than its content but I think I gave a fair rating...
Rated: 6 Posted on: 2014-01-23 09:16:48 
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@Sax0joE if you mean gimme the loot and dear mama as random words...gimme the loot is a song by biggie and dear mama is a song by 2pac and REALLY you have to listen to those two songs if you like RAP and youll know what im on about and hit em up and scared straight are songs that 2pac made about biggie after they fell out
Posted on: 2014-01-23 12:29:16 
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@SaxOjoE
Posted on: 2014-01-23 12:30:27 
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Nice Read
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-23 14:36:12 
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And if you dont know anything about 2pac and biggie then you shouldnt rap
Posted on: 2014-01-24 09:09:17 
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Generous rate for the effort n love of these two legends. Some good content in here but some aren't too relevant too. Maybe make it shorter next time n cut out all the boring part. Also to make ur flow smoother try to use consistent multies. But overall a good effort. 8.9 rounded up to 9 homie.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-24 16:01:02 
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Juicy R this was a good read you did good no hate
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2014-01-29 19:01:59 
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Just because you write something doesn't mean it has to be battled structure. I dig it.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-02-01 14:27:32 
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