working on everything that's required of me// i find little time to breathe/ and even less inspired to be// the fact is I can get a little tired of always having to be me// but I'm trying and no one can pop these tires but me// making changes that I can// turning wheels and burning rubber// moving towards a better me// but I can't just forget that one thing lead to another// because that's now a part of me// and somewhere along the way it got a little hard to see// and as you can see, I made mistakes that brought me here// n I'm not saying you're to blame// but when the blind lead the blind// neither one can be the seer// but I'm okay with that// and I can deal with this// one day I will be mine again// when I'm no longer his... transcribed.

Posted on: 2015-03-30 06:14:07

Flow wasn't bad. Words were overwhelmed by the beat though. Next time try adjust the volumes. Good stuff.

Posted on: 2015-03-30 06:26:22

Lookin past the volumes shit, mad potential here, good shit

Posted on: 2015-03-30 07:17:10