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bro i was feeling that nice read had heart
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-29 18:28:20 
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dimes away yo much respect yo...M.A.D!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-29 22:02:48 
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DIMES for sure. that shit was hot!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-30 03:12:39 
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Not bad. Multis could have been more creative however they stayed the same sylabel count so not bad. Concepts lack doh. Bet you got to like the 3rd last bar and taught to yourself 'Damn what can I right next'... Iverall ima toss you an 8
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-08-30 14:25:00 
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Thank you.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-30 14:26:17 
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This was good man! I caught the flow on almost all of it without having to double back n the story was on tact. Good job.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-08-30 14:38:38 
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COST IN THE WORLD TO BE BREATHING"/// LOST ON THE ROAD TO SUCEEDING///RESPECT WHAT THEY DONE/// EXCEPT WITH NO DRUGS... Crazy props yo... You have some nasty ass bars in there... Damn, You should really really send me eight or anything, I'd love to battle you.. That shits an easy ass ten no doubt...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-31 01:27:09 
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Yo famo, good cypher, u lost me in a couple spots, inners need a lil work, but for the most part u were on que with the multis, this was a good concept for a cypher, just work on ur set ups a lil more, ull b killin'em soon- good drop- 9 1/2
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-31 03:02:30 
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I give you a nine. there were many lines that caught, and your rhyme schem elevated as you went through. There were no boring points and not too many run on's in between which is some thing i even have trouble with sometimes. "" I'm straight edge, won't lie and would never TOUCH SUCH A SUBSTANCE" Cuz i've seen loved ones run out of LUCK, FUCK A SUMMONSE ""
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-31 19:55:13 
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pretty good not the sickest ive heard but pretty good
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-08-31 20:50:59 
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thats sup
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-09-01 22:28:17 
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wut they all said....high ish bro..nice read
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-09-04 16:53:12 
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i rated it what I rated it cuz I fealt ya on every line. I've lost a couple friends as well. There's no easy way of going about it. Makin them proud, I think, is the best way of going about it.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-09-06 17:32:51 
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I liked it, u do a good job on bringin emotion to a verse, and that always makes for a good read, good shit man
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-09-16 08:07:11 
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