*annonymus police officer on speaker* (chopper, semi-autos shooting and crowded sound mixed in background) "we have surrounded the building and all exits, cease fire and surrender now while you still can, we have a shoot to kill order, i repeat we have an authorized shoot to kill order.." 10 minutes later *mobile rings* *hears loud and crowded noise, cant make out what he's hearing* the only clear message he heard was.... *distinct ive voice* ".....your wife has just given birth to a baby boy" *murmurs with happiness but lost for words and in confusion* *drops phone*

Posted on: 2009-04-07 16:28:49

yeah yeah.. fuck it.. hahaha i did the whole spacing thing but you cant do that for comments.. so .. yall work it out.. fuck it.. haha easyyy

Posted on: 2009-04-07 16:29:19

should say ill be the one to blame*

Posted on: 2009-04-07 16:30:46

I hope you motherfuckers like it.

Posted on: 2009-04-07 16:31:39

Yeah and fuck if the multis are a bit broken, Lmao. Can't sacrifice content for that shit. Yad'aamean

Posted on: 2009-04-07 16:40:40

its a 10 easy i liked tha multies they werent broken enough to make much difference good all around i enjoyed tha read
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-07 17:48:45

Very Enjoyable
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-07 20:46:15

Haha, thanks y'all. I'm glad it's enjoyable. :D !

Posted on: 2009-04-07 22:41:34

10 ez.....mFD'z all day. some decent shit right here. peep mine out.

Posted on: 2009-04-08 07:46:51

brilliant man.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-09 12:07:09

Fire son..i'll see you next round...
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2009-04-09 22:58:43

Thanks for the feedback folks , much love!

Posted on: 2009-04-10 02:56:48

Damn!!! 10 ez you gotta appreciate that one...good shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-12 18:52:20

Nice story + flow was nice too...10's all round...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-13 12:27:54

Votes for cyphers never close aii?.. Haha. Good looks y'all. Preciate the love.

Posted on: 2009-04-17 11:57:48

Damn, This A Good Read Famz...10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-27 19:35:30