send me round 3

Why don't you go first in round 3?

Btw.. can someone please review my bars? I'm new to battles I wanna know bout the things I have to improve in.. thanks.. 

ok ill send it

Sonic made me laugh 😂😂😂 Antix didn't try much but he had multis and flow and few punches enough to beat sonic's verse. But he failed to successfully rebuttal Sonic.

Ok so I'm commenting again after seeing Sonic's comment for feedback on his verse. According to me, you should carry a consistent multi-set. . it's difficult to win with single syllables because people compare different areas of your verse like punches, multis, flow, wordplays, metaphors.. punches are main, they have to be unexpected. Taking "ant sized dick" as example, it was just a plain diss/insult.. it didn't have any specific value in the line   .. even if you had said "rat sized dick" it wouldn't have changed. Punches should be specific to a setup. You could have said, " I'm talking Marvel when I quip, You couldn't go Scott-free with that ant-sized-dick." (Antman scheme)

Needs a lot of research to formulate setups.. I'm not yet an expert on how that research works perhaps others can shed some light on it or may be suggest a different technique. (Also DM me the same if you do xD)

Thank you brahmos.. it was helpful.. 

not bad but also not good my fellaz

this coment could be named umbrella 

the first battler had a funny verse but didn't really present battle bars like the second battler  displayed. to me this was an easy win for battler number two