Blacknaruto.. your submission was not really close to meeting the criteria of a "battle" imo... I don't know if you want your opponent to "catch these hands" or grind on your dick?? 😂 either way, some improvements to how you approach these writtens will help you a lot. Remember to attack your opponent with disses and punches, don't try to seduce him! Cross has my vote for multis, punches and a generally more interesting read.

Honestly I just picked at random both had the same consistency and smooth rhyme and both could get better but good job guys

thanks  Tskr   for the vote cross did have the fire tho not gonna lie

Tskr if u don't stay to weak ass off my battles 😑

Crew

Swaggaaaaaaaaaaa

no disrepect but this is not a battle. one guy tried to go hard and kinda stumbled on his own rhythm. the other dropped a hook to an unwritten club sex song.    

one was more complex the other was outmatched here so fair vote no hate

clear victor here. Cross executed a flawless drop. nice flow easy read. good on the creativity. fv in

Naruto this would be better as a rap song than a battle verse but nonetheless bravo. Cross mage a battle orientated verse so he took the dub.