Yooo, Justo is back! Good to see ya. Ultimately I think this was an extremely close battle.

Jacob, your line "my shit is off the hook like a fortunate fish" was everything you should be aiming for in your writing. You used multi-rhymes and flipped a double-meaning into a punchline. Please please please do more of this. Unfortunately you were held back by two factors. Firstly, you didn't fill the box. Just don't use line breaks, keep writing until it says you have 8 lines. This one step is objectively necessary to win (unlike stuff like capping multis) because it affects the physical quantity of material you bring to the table. Secondly, one-syllable rhymes like be/me just won't cut it.

I have Justo edging this by a narrow margin, due mostly to actually filling the box. Stuff like his closer and the meat suplpy line were nice also.

jacob fill da box n use multis if u wnna get far . Just 2 da G just hit harder simple. fv

Some nice multis jacob. Keep grindin. Sick muliple syllable rhyme schemes justo. Respect. Nice opener. Dryer sheet line was funny. Propz