KILLERS

LOL... Props to both on this one. Both were pretty much equal here in terms on content, even though one was completely trolling. OHIM is steadily improving, keep at it, man. Locks gone AWOL. Fairs in. 

So...I tweaked this from a battle I was about to respond to with some dude who then deleted his account.. Took a chance to throw down with this decorated vet!! any and all criticism is welcome and appriciated! 

MACK SPITTAZ!!!

Nice multi show down. No hate i just feel a lot if rhymes were forced but still dope none the less. Mel was more direct but felt like more of a freestyle. This was close. I enjoy mels style and respect locks aswell i dig that multi flow just felt a lil forced maybe cause theyre not words I use often.lock had a sick closer. Respect  2 both fv in my opinion 

heavy battle , both drops are heavy asf

ER^!@$D^YHRGT

Lockhart - wtf was that LOL nar i can tell you put out a trolll  verse for some reason that first line was funny asf. The little adlibs were lol (LAUGH OUT LOUD) tbh if someone srs put in a dope verse u probably wouldve lost bcoz your verse is funny asf but its so troll but actually enjoyable to read 

mel - really competitive verse imo you might get voted below what your verse was because of who its against but u defs put out a pretty good verse. just one thing theres so many multies out there u dont ever have to say something like "slop bars" also that multie set didnt really go anywhere. The whole mum part shouldve been left out imo its pointless saying stuff like that. theres set ups and punchlines, thats it. if your line isnt serving one of those purposes it should be scrapped.

anyway good battle ive got lock winning cos even tho he was trolling to the max he still had some good punches and it was funny (DON DOMARCO) CKT

Mack Spittaz!

Fuck it I was gonna drop a long vote explaining my thoughts here but it was turning into an actual essay. Mel I thought you did well but unfortunately didn't have the consistency in your execution, or throw enough punches, to beat out what was a ludicrous but beautifully executed and wildly entertaining BATS verse from Lock. Brilliant read so thanks to both of you.

Props to Lock for maintaining the scheme but I feel like Mel was more aggressive and had the better flow although Lock had a few nice punches I just don’t feel like it was enough 

Kind of a Tie,and this Battle kind of Made me feel angry,..i think i know how the battle will be decided..so i'm voting just to see,i feel no one will feel like me..

Lockhart-  This battle isn't indicative of the legacy that you built,..This shit is ASS on your Part and i found it extremely hard to understand WHAT THE FUCK YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT,.. clearly it seem's  like an Open which is why you Used all the Guy lines against a female,..(for a "Legend" why wouldn't you account for this?..) I read this shit 4 time's,..line for line..in anger..Like what??.. It was Word Soup to me..You didn't say anything and most of your Punches made no sense..You clearly had the Multi's..it was like Eminem in the hiphop  olympic's pre Infinite.. You said..."You're bout to be BOOSTED W/ PRUNE JUICES...??(What).. while MOVIN W/ DOOMED MOOSES (Whatever the fuck that is)to DUNES.. IN THE ROOMS... PROVEN to ZOOM IN LAGOON HOOCHES! -Tf..? ...AHHHHHHH!!!".. and then you added your Adlib,like it was Coke..who are you right now?.. and then it went on from there,..in succession,the Rhyming  Of Presumed/Resumed/Exhumed,.. is a Pet peeve i would let go if they lead to something or had impactful punches,.." I said I get it "crackin when I score on the net" like ROOSTERS IN COOPS SHOOTIN (get it?)".. ..No..nigga..we don't get it..!

while his "ROUNDS would only dig this dick out of a hole...." w/ BOOBS THAT EXHUME GOOBERS,.. what do you mean by this?..the digging a dick OUT..of a hole is only throwing ..me..because you said Goober,..which is a booger,..or candy,..  I could go on.. that wholeyour gun gets a nasty temperement .. Like your gun is Presumed Ruthless is corny, You used Temp in place of the word Reputation or something,...the rubix cube isn't smooth,it's literally a cube that is 90 degree angles,made up of squares,but i do understand that..you mean . it's original shape..don't know wtf Product sell's is or why you used 2 square Metaphors..or how that shit even made sense..with the word square.. .. you capped  your verse with "my flow's hot w/ this fire shit" like LUCIFER'S POOP'S FLUID!...This Guy..lol.3x grand champ ova here..

This shit garbage bro..i'm assuming the Lina Lines are about Mel?..Mel-Lina??..idk..

Mel- dude..you got a lockhart battle and you chose,to rap like ..Lock Hart,..Flop Bars, Not smart.. with no Punchline.. then you started another line..with Bum fights..gun sights..BRO... stop fucking rapping like  that..iliterally voted for you Because you were more Coherent ..it felt like Locks stuff was All flash without the Fire.. and your shit was like the little engine that could..He didn't show up..only reason i think you were better,...I liked the insinuatig he was Gay,when you said expose a rainbow,the insert his crew name part was kind of witty,...it changed my mood after reading that,..Rhyming Lockhart with Not Hard is wack.. so..im in Niagara,..and know the maid of the Mist,..(there's no fish)..myonly argument of the line was..you just wanted to have something to rhyme with it,..and stayed with the scheme,..but the Phrase Maid..of the MISSED?..means absolutely nothing,..where are you from that Raising you..Rhymes with Attitude?.. 

i'm casting this vote to Give my take on it and with the intention of seeing,..one person win a battle off of Name recognition alone,..

Damn i dropped a speech

Damn zul did not hold back lmao.. i appricaite the criticism and I totally agree with you about my verse. Honestly I rushed it. the interior was the most solid and i threw some shit in to make the 16 lines lol.. 

also agree with what you said about locks verse.. I keep wondering if there is something I'm missing because I'm new here and dont have a solid understanding of some things ...like wtf a "bats bar" is lol

pen skills by both.

But I gotta give this to ohhey.. harder bars and dope multis

ou ‘washed up’ like a boxer wit DUMB STRIKES, I’m clean, but punching ‘dirty’ like BUM FIGHTS

@ZulKarnain - I know what you mean, I had this battle very close aswel. I honestly think lockhart was joking/trolling i refuse to believe someone of lockharts calibre would write seriously ... cause "my flow's hot w/ this fire shit" like LUCIFER'S POOP'S FLUID ... I assumed he was trolling and if u read it as a troll it is quite funny. I dare say if it wasnt a troll then it was garbage but mar im pretty sure it was supposed to be sarcastic which made it funny 

i have no boas, i know neither of these dudes. but i know relationships ae built on sites lie these. but just cuz a dude wrote a couple garbage bars doesnt mean hes trolling.. so you cant base your decision on "i read it like he was trolling and it was funny".. get the fuck outta here with that..now im not saying lockhart cant write.. so dont get ya panties in a bunch. but for me, i read shit like I'd hear it in a real battle.. and if the shit is corny or they trying to get too deep and streathcing shit then it aint gonna come out live.. if you have to explain everything then you trying to hard

meant to saw bias.. i dont read my shit before i hit send. you should see my text messages

@sypher - hes literally the most decorated text battler in the sites history, read all his plaques. He 100% wrote this in a sarcastic manner. Remember when eminem said in the bet cypher "spiritual, lyrical, miracle, in your swimming pool" and everyone thought was hilarious because they knew he was being sarcastic. That's what I got from loclharts verse. Having the most decorated, experienced battler in the sites history say boobs that exhume goobers is funny asf to me 

Nost decorated battler on a fucking wack ass website.. eminem was trolling yout faggots. Dont compare eminems intro bullshit. Because afterwards he spit so many hard bars that budden couldnt even sit still. If you gonna come corny then back that shit up with even hatser bars. I just googled a website and jumped on here for entertainment. Ill be gone before you know it.. but this corny ass shit with people voting cuz they scared their internet king had an off day because he didnt take the battle serious then he gotta take the L... take it or leave it... i coukd give a fuck.  

so how do you deserve to win..?

You're bout to be BOOSTED W/ PRUNE JUICES while MOVIN W/ DOOMED MOOSES to DUNES IN THE ROOMS PROVEN to ZOOM IN LAGOON HOOCHES! AHHHHHHH!!! hahahahah Lock on fiyah here