PUNCHLINE BATTLE 🔥

Both were definitely inconsistent but one just came off as more logical to me. Both seem pretty even but I would like to see more structured idea's connecting from both sides. I usually don't vote unless it's a fire battle, but I see battles that aren't getting ANY votes, so here I am. Fair vote

Being honest both the verses lacked proper set-up's to the punchlines. Both need to polish their bars!

Here the winner came up with more connected punchlines & the verse was flowing well when read out loud.

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Cred I think you came a lil light this time. You got three punches in there, kind of stretched out the setups and wasted time in my eyes. The ideas were cool, don't think they had the best delivery, on the other hand 40 had great delivery, and contained more punches without losin the flow. But the concepts for example shootin some shit wit more kick than a karate flick. You can do more to that and make it more effective. A lot of people have said that exact line. That's 2005 material, it's the little things though, you could've made a reference to drugs, like if he GOTTA BRICK he'll see the CHOPPA KICK like KARATE FLICKS  karate chop / kick breaking bricks... and it made your line ten times better, also flows better too. Just an example. Again cred I just don't think you brought enough hear, the long setups in the 8 line box really hindered ya verse.

the first guy had better punches the second guy didn't really connect any it was an alright battle