double scheme battle? 

1st scheme = STARTED SWELLING

2nd scheme = DANGEROUS FELON

or just battle.. 

My bad I read your comments too late

i got one for being more creative the other was not bad either but i do like the drop the label verse. but i got josh taking this. fv no h8

josh was pretty strong in this battle although nothing extraordinary i feel like he took this pretty easily although the loser did do well

Nice battle. Killa edge it with directness! Josh had dope multis but they wrent hard hitting. 

Close battle here my winner had the better punches and kept it consistent with jabs and dope multis.. fv yO fv back

Im Going with the host, Cuz he wasnt as weak as his opponnet in the Energy with Hostlity i could be wrong thoe.. .

josh send me a battle which isnt a blind drop ill destroy u ur trash 

Josh the you were pretty dope up until I say ten star bars. The idea was there but you switched the rhyme scheme in a weird spot and left the sparked an L when multi as the last punch which is just phrased weird as well, the when insinuates something else is coming then the rhyme scheme just switched. And you got the multis down but the setup and delivery just isn't clean cut just yet in all aspects. Again the first 3 bars were rocking, smooth, coincided with each other, a better flip with satan or and ended with the same rhyme scheme there would have been a complete battle rap setup delivery etc... the arranging wedding line was a good scheme but you could've incorporated wedding word association and made it a better punchline. 

40 - this verse was much smoother and set up with the delivery. Just a grimey street battle. Again I still think you can be more creative in the references and setups. But you've got a consistent concise delivery which had more punchlines landing for me. 

fair votes in. Good luck. 

I know I might get hate but idc this battle could go either way tbh loser had nice punches here and there but the win goes down to whoever had the better finish. Good battle no hate