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Battle started: June 6th at 08:54
Challenger joined: June 6th at 12:54


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2020-06-06 12:54:48).

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RhymeClops

Punisher came light. Was surprised. Topic had some nice punches. Basic rhymes no multies but ok punches. Seems like Punisher didn't try hard. One sided in my opinion. 

Voted: The Punisherr: 4 / OFFTOPIK: 5
Posted on: 2020-06-06 21:08:30 Private Message RhymeClops

RickyLahey

The fair vote is in. I always vote on multiple syllable rhymes, wordplay, vocab, metaphors, and of course punchlines. Respect this vote or fuck off. 

Voted: The Punisherr: 9 / OFFTOPIK: 7
Posted on: 2020-06-06 21:18:57 Private Message RickyLahey

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Posted on: 2020-06-07 16:42:54 Private Message The Punisherr

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Pun: good flow, good multi and scheme work. Just buff up that punch complexity and you're in a great spot fam! You just kind of went for basic insults. You have great flow but Make the reader either go "damn that's clever" or at least amazing enough to make them laugh. If you had at least two good punches here I probably would've given this too you pretty easy. Good shot tho

OFF: you took a predictable angle with the concept but did a decent job. You pretty much outplayed him concept wise but your rhyming wasn't that tight in places. (CANCELLED/RATTLED/BARREL/BATTLE?) you were probably going for like an ABAB pattern but even then it's shaky. Then there's stuff like syllable count you should watch too. Pretty small rhymes. Try having 4 as a minimum.

overall this goes to off for complexity/creativity despite flow issues. Good battle y'all 

Voted: The Punisherr: 6 / OFFTOPIK: 6
Posted on: 2020-06-09 16:20:38 Private Message GOOD GRIEF

 

 
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