ok NICEKILL , in terms of going after your opponent and getting aggy with it , you got a good approach , only trouble is ...i aint really seeing any multis in there , a few one syllable schemes going on but you gonna have to start bumpin that up if you wanna do well here ...props for the aggression tho , just get more creative with it 

Bnas laid down a good enough verse , basic but good enough to easliy take the win here

fv in 

NICE KILL, i got a open battle for you by name! Come lets see who's king . Check out text battles, i will fuck you in a click. And you're gonna loose this one too bruh!

Nicekill work more on the concept of multisyllabic rhyme schemes and wordplay in your verse. Also you should really work on your punchlines/creativity not just writing with rhymes.

Bnas you snipped this battle. Simple verse nice rhymes and nice punches too. 

One was garbage, one was slightly above average. The fair vote is in. I always vote on multiple syllable rhymes, wordplay, vocab, metaphors, and of course punchlines. Respect this vote or fuck off. 

Bnas wins with an allround better structured drop nice had some decent rhymes and was aggressive but you need to cap your punchs and structure ur rhymes better, nohate fv