that opener tho'

weak

I have to go to the first guy on this one . his verse had heavier punches and great Multis. overall it was just a better verse in my opinion.

ok, usually i dont put expos, but here i go:

expo 1:

"that his beef is fresh when we see it's bullshit":

translation: beef "is fresh" vs the shit from a bull/cow

expo 2:

"holdin up a message saying we vets done proving it"

translation: holding up a sign, like in a protest. we are showing that we have proven the letsbeef opponent sucks at beefing.

expo 3:

"what he did with his crewmen was ridiculous"

translation: "crewmen" could mean like your let's beef rap crew, or a bunch of police officers chocking a man to death

expo 4: 

"but if he's somehow crowned a victory"

translation: "crowned" could refer to royalty, such as king or queen (think about a connection to chess for the next expo). or it could mean that the police officer who is in jail right for killing a black guy, if he is found not guilty, it is a loss for most people but a win for him.

expo 5: 

"wrecked but two inches"

translation: the lets beef opponent's penis is two inches and looks destoyed. 

expo 6:

"wont be kneeling down since the bishop ends up doin this"

translation: 'kneeling down' as preparation for giving oral sex to the two inch penis. it could also mean that protestors "could stop" kneeling in front of police if the guilty cop is set free and they do something else instead. the bishop is a holy figure that has been responsible for past molestation cases, hence the bishop will do the sexual oral act. also the bishop is a piece in chess (remember, "crowned victory" and "bishop".

expo 7: 

"spit has lost it's thick fragrance"

translation: "spit" is also like "spitting a verse" or dropping rhyme. when his spit has "lost its fragrance", it means he is dropping rhymes that arent great or pleasing. 

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everything else in the 8 bar should be self explanatory. 

thanks for voting!

Zayah: I felt like your verse was a lot cleaner and easier to read. It had a good start and end to it. can't really complain.

Kru: All the Vet talk was cool I guess. But sometimes when you need to expo its because you made shit complicated to read. I understood the concept however it wasnt really a diss. more of a boast. the beginning was solid. The ending got lost.

Billyswartz's nonsensical vote deleted.

Felt Zayah had better punches here and a lot less forced material while Kru had some forced multis and not everything was really hitting that well. Fair's in.