i slipped and finished it by accident my bad..

Nice fellas. 16 is where it's at. Iam the mention, fist bump, kids lunch were all solid. One major flaw I see is the self hype. Your closer shouldn't have been in this battle. Have to come direct fam but you had some solid hits. Also your multis was mismatched in some places. McRattle nice to see you expanding your multis this battle. I see you tried to go for the kill shot. You have an idea of punches. Just need to fix your wording bro. P.m if you want to practice. Could go either way, I'm going with this guy because I felt he delivered his verse cleaner 

IamTheNme's verse seems more so like a text cypher per se in regards to the lack of actual punchlines, compared to that of an actual batltle verse which his opponent brought more of here. IamTheNme's verse was mediocre because it lacked in structure, had no good multi's, nothing was set up in a way to convey a punchline and there just wasn't any from what I've observed. His attempts at being direct, aggressive and lyrical were good but just didn't cut it here. 

MCRattle clowned the absolute fuck out of his opponent. Barely took him seriously with his comedy approach as the responder was simply fucking around in the beginning and not even being serious. However, he progressive became more direct towards his opponent and kept me a lot more engaged with his verse; had really cool multi-syllable incorporation and the bars actually kind of made sense.  

Zilla!!

Rattles on some other shit now, nothing but respect for that.. nothing like seeing someone elevate right infront of your own eyes.. NME did good here but Rattle went for the throat early yO

Iamnme typed basic on ranked battlw so obviously a revwrae snipe for rattle qho incorporated moee heaviee bars and such so easy win for MC Rattle. fair vote.