Nme: Again, set ups, for the most part, have little to nothing to do with your punchlines. Multis are also a bit awkward. #TimeToElevate. 

Rattle: I like your idea here, flipping all of his lines back at him. That's a good thing to do when it's done right. Though, sadly that is not the case here. You executed this idea poorly and the multis of this suffered. Also the punches weren't really hitting. Keep at it. Overall: I have Nme taking the win here, though both have room for improvement. Fairs in, i'm out. 

Wrote this for your blinddrop but got beat to it 

One dude came thru with a better verse, other dude had seemed to hit a road block with his last few battles. Consistency won this for me yO

Rattle just Went way too basic with his concepts abd rhyming here to really have any chance to be effective. The more structured and smoother drop with more developed writing wins out here