Guts vote deleted upon request.

I liked the first guy Multis a lot and he had better punches this one I'm definitely going with the first guy

Doo Doo definitely not playing around today, battle after battle dude keeps going in. KK is back and he back with a vengeance.. fv in yO

Idk what doe was capping but I hope those weren't supposed to be multis. Anyway, doe made marginally more sense here than usual but stil saying ridiculous shit and Kk was just solid overall to take this with ease. 

kold, in your first bar you start out by saying your name followed by "com" which made me confused, I was wondering if you were possibly promoting your own website. i think you meant to say “come” so i'll just say i'm marking points for that. “death clip” is a weird phrase as well, i'm not i know of such a thing, maybe it's poetic, however it's just strange wording. “reaper in the show” is a bad multi, cause the wording describes a rather ambiguous and confusing situation. what show? what do you mean by reaper? i think you're implying you're a killer in the battle, but i think it's a reach, and the multi is forced. the flip in your first punch falls completely flat however, since you're essentially saying you'll be another cold body, like another cold body. Also, stripper, and reaper do not rhyme, and again, you're multi seems forced, and the concept as well, since it'd have to be a very specific situation which wouldn't typically occur in order for your flip to make any sort of sense. why would a stripper be in snow? what's the difference between a stripper in the snow legit any other person in the snow? there's no flip about her actually stripping, so singling out this profession is confusing in itself. this simple flip works on two levels, one being the cold, the other being a body. so we've established how the body portion didn't quite work here, so i'll focus on the cold. you're saying cold like snow, in the end. which is something that infants understand. the snow is cold. i think you could have enhanced this bar to some degree by referring to perhaps to walt disney, who was believed to of been frozen in a cryonic chamber (which he wasn't) or turned this into a punch about cryogenics in general. it's still a simple flip, but i think the key take away for you is to avoid forcing multis with bad wording, and to focus on making more creative flips. 

your second bar says this: you are an animal until i come to your spot because you need slaps, you'd only throw a fit if there were a chaos at a zoo. when you read it like that, it seems pretty nonsensical. first off, you only describe them as an animal to force your flip at the end, and there's absolutely no rhyme or reason for this, so it comes off forced, especially when you break your own logic by following through with an animal themed punch when you had already dismissed him for being said animal in the first place. idk, it's pretty confusing to follow this, seems all the elements are severely underthought. the middle section doesn't seem to have any purpose other than filler, and the actual flip is once again not really flipping anything. how does a zoo mishap equate to a person going ape shit? i feel like you're reaching pretty severely here, and the worst part is the reach is for such a bad concept. the take away is to strive for bars that are logicaland don't rely on absurd events or ideas. 

right away in your third punch i'm scratching my head. "quit d talkin boo this crap" i'm not sure what this implies and surely there was a typo or two that made this line unreadable, and then you proceed to once again "go to your spot" which kind of feels massively redundant. up and running like laptops isn't a flip either, because all electronics could be considered up and running, in fact, that setup is so severely vague that it could apply to most functions. people are up and running. the company is up and running. once again, you've made such a simple flip, it really isn't a flip at all. 

your fourth bar is the third time you've described 'going to their spot' and i feel like you're showing such lazy writing, that it makes it near impossible to value any sort of following punch, however, this flip is clearly your best. it's vague, and i wouldn't consider it strong, but it's a much better flip than anything previous. the biggest issue here is execution, be it the horrible wording, or the extremely lengthy line to get to the setup, and then on to the punch. 

Dope trax

the first thing i'm going to suggest is that you learn the spellcheck function. secondly, the horrible grammar makes it nearly impossible to sort your verse out, and with the lack of flips and punches, it's best for me to jut surmise your verse as a whole, rather than break down each individual line.

every single one of your flips were even more basic than what kold brought to the table, and where he actually went through the effort of trying to format his punches in a legible way, you did not. i also felt like a lot of what was said here was just general nonsense that has no purpose other than to be filler, and that's basically the gist of this. 

kold struggled severely here, but his opponent couldn't even manage to be half as good. this is a clear win for kold.