H1Z1, I need you start working on your punches a bit more. Got the scheming down but you're lacking some heavy hitters in there that lowered the quality of your verse.

Yung Santa - As I broke it down earlier, I believe we have a solid piece of work here. Keep working and doing your thing.

The office supplies bit felt more consistent than where H! was heading, however I did feel his closing line.

Vote - Santa

This was a solid scrap, but ultimately H1Z1 rhymed consistently and complexly enough to take this.

H1Z1 I wasn't sure about the "[KILL] & [REAL]" stuff because I wasn't sure what the square brackets meant, in that situation I would personally have used a colon ("Donalds timepiece: real!"). Your schemes often overlapped, as in you started using a new one before you finished with your previous one, which could get a little confusing at times. Also I wasn't fully clear on all of your punches. I thought your closing lines were your strongest.

MC yung santa, I thought your Walker line was one of your best. However, not all of your lines made sense to me. What is a 'mumblin stapler'? Paper doesn't really crumble, it crumples, but I gave you the benefit of the doubt that might be a typo. Also using a line break at the end took away from the amount of material you could bring.

both bad, win for H since he filled out the box i guess. both of you need to consider how you word shit, cause these verses made little sense.