Just Wellin, welcome to the website.Your nun was your line of the battle. However, the others were very simplistic and you had a pauseworthy line in there, wtf. try to read more battles on here so you can be used to the style.

troy, I need you start on those syllables my brother. It's hurting, you throwing jabs in there but restricting your self from throwing haymakers due to scheming.

Keep working, chico

Vote goes to KILLA T for showing a bit more consistency and not having a pause worthy bar

the content was basically the same, but troy obviously made the effort to fill the box. both of you need to focus on punches. turn your diss into a punch man. 

Both clearly still finding themselves. Keep pushing it. You'll mold into formidable mcs. Try increasing your syllable usage multies and wordplay instead of direct simple rhyme this with that. Too easy. Find your creative engine.

LOL some shit is just funny and brighten up peoples day, well i guess JUST wellin is not to be fucked with.....and KILLA TROY what you gotta type correctly bro both did ok could be better no hate

This battle was VERY difficult for me to make a decision on. In the end, JustWellin had attemped punches throughout his verse much more than KILLA TROY, and his rhyming was more consistent and always actually worked, unlike Killa Troy's. Normally not filling the box would instantaneously lose someone the battle, but I thought that JustWellin was able to put more into his bars and execute them more cleanly so that even though they were fewer in number they had a bigger impact on me as a reader.

JustWellin, if you're just starting out in this then you have massive potential. Your most important next step is to not use line breaks, fill the box right up like Killa Troy did here. Also, try to have multi-syllabic rhymes where you're rhyming 3+ syllables each time instead of only one or two (and CAPITALISE your rhyming syllables). Your closer was the closest to a regular punch.

Killa Troy I think you were tryna go for a quick snipe here but the dude was better than you expected. Really take the time in future, no matter who you're facing, to double check that every rhyme actually rhymes (SNIPER/MAMA ?) and that you're using 3+ syllables every time. Your "cakes" line was one of your best, but really try to make sure all of your lines are clear and direct hits.

Props to both battlers, with a few small changes you both have the talent to be producing much greater verses so get to work elevating! If either of you want any more feedback or some advice, feel free to hit me up.

Pretty much Troy wins here by default, his opponent, didn't really seem interested in battling 

fill in the box!