the difference here was obvious. fu, you gotta 1. fill in the box, and 2. work on building actual punches. a decent diss and jab won't get you far here. it's all about that punch. 

clear winner here, one felt like he was cyphering mostly while the other was more focused on dissing with better attempts at metaphors with the austin and back to bed lines.

Both verses here were ridden with issues, but santa had clearer multis and had lines that were reminiscent of actual punches, whereas fubam's verse flowed well but lacked structure or punches.

MC yung santa, your best line was your snake in the grass line, it showed that you can deliver a punch. Try to work on your multies being more together, so like "host fighting/ghost writing" instead of breaking them up. Also try for longer multies, 3 should be your bare minimum.

fubam you had a lot of rhyming and a nice flow, but you really need to peep the verses of more experienced battlers on the site to see how we do things round here. Try to have lines that build towards multi-syllabic rhymes a bit like MC yung santa did here, and to have more punchlines (kind of like jokes that attack your opponent).

Here it is:

MC Yung had the better structure and ryhmes in his verse. However, I'm bout to break it down so y'all can get something out of my feedback. The opener bar for YUNG SANTA was decent. I liked the fact that you used Steve Austin's new show which is good. It's always good to use current events. You did associate it with a known concept but it is okay. I wasn't really enjoying how you set it up though. The mold line could have been done better. That opener bar was a 6.5. The Crackhead line was okay but it wasnt hard hitting. It was def not a punch nor a haymaker. Just a soft poke. Just telling him that is rambling.  Eh, you could do better than that. A 5 for me.. The snake in the grass was an okay concept. I wish you could have had a better set up or word associastion for that bar but over all it was decent, another 6.5. The Moaning Myrtle was a reach for me, tbh. I am a harry potter fan but that line really didn't do nothing for me. A 5 for me.

Overall, Santa. You got potential but this seems like you keystyled or you wrote it when you were high. Some okay concepts and okay ryhming but in order to compete on LB, you must bring better material. Your LOTB was the 'Broken skulls' current even line.

VERSUS

Fuban. 

first off, welcome to the site Fuban. Good to see new cats battle like you. I hope you can stick around and be part of our community. To be honest, I was not enjoying your opening bar. It seems like you just put some words together. Sounds like a freestyle tbh. 'Including you keys' was badly worded and in my opinion, did not make sense. If you can clarify that for me in a private message, that'd be cool but I def was not connected with the bar.  I spoke 4 me did not make sense. 2nd bar seemed off. Your closer was basically saying you were good and honestly, you could do much better.

MY SUGGESTION is to start reading more LB battles and start practicing ''MULTIS''. Start with 2 then move to 3 then move to more. 

PAPI VOTE goes to Yung Santa with a 6 and Fuban with a 4