Guts is finally back with his real name !! lol :D

nothing much to say here other than this was a snipe which went overkill after the first bar itself. good shit guts you actly got to balancing your crisp wording and set ups with dope flips too now lethal combo anyday man. u haven't only gone up a few notches but by a few dimensions too lol BOTB - 

damn son, why you gotta TROLL ON THE SITE? so i told my crew i'm a ROLL WIT' A KNIFE and have em 'lookin shook in front of these kids' like bush when TOLD OF THE FLIGHTS!!!

One lacked any sort of punchlines or build ups that could make impact while the other was levels above in all areas. Experience showed & took the W here.

wow really. 100 characters. make no sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dope Trax, your flow is getting really good, but you need to work on forming your bars into actual punches.

Guts, I can see you were going quickly here because there's a bit of filler (and that beef/beef concept is so old and stale it would be thrwn out in the garbage too lol) but overall you had some nice and clean scheming that gave you a sick flow, plus a solid jab to open with and a decent closer.

Trax, you been here a minute. I would like you to STOP writing in small caps and start structuring your verse a bit more like LB does it. (Lb Custom verse). Your opener bar was more like a soft job, but no actual punchline. Just stating that you will split a back. I want you to also start reading battle tutorial about PUNCHLINES. That will get you far. If you need help? Hit me up and I'll give you some tips. The middle partt had no direction and really had no sting for me. The closer was also very lack luster. 

I am glad you're trying but I want you to def step it up. I will be looking closely.

VERSUS

Guts

Structure was good. Scheming seemed to be all right until I read the punch. I get the concept but the wording and delivery made it from an 8 to a 5.5. Bring death like a whisper, first time I hear that but we'll let it slide. The use of sir in that bar is kinda cringeworthy in my opinion, seemed fillerish. The beef  / Garbage line was okay. Another example of how your wording is kinda killing you here. Scheming was okay but the delivery is making you lost MAD pts here. Went from a 7 to a 5.5. Your closer was the BOTB. Simple, sweet, straight to the point and it made sense. Delivery was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better than the rest.

It all comes down to:

3 punches in total for Guts. 2 with bad delivery, one with okay delivery. Giving him a 6 for the effort. 

As far as Dope Trax, chico - I need you to STEP IT UP. Giving you a 4 here just based on everything above.

Papi vote goes to Gut

*lose mad

DedSec.

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