Emcee man, this wasn't very good I feel like you didn't have any actual punches just petty grade school insults and your multies didn't match up and it really affected the readability. Ruin started pretty strong. Good concept and a solid jab right out the gate. The 2K controls was a pretty clever part. Didn't expect that at all.... I feel like Ruin was much better in every category. He gets my vote due to this

I feel ones verse was choppy for most parts of his verse. Nothing to highlighting. Had a jab here and there but that was about it in my opinion. The other definitely had the better punches and had more of a uniqueness to them. Set ups were pretty proper as well. Not much else to say good luck to both. 

Nice read up y'all but I have my winner with a better verse..

The build ups in sickest rd coulda been better and mosta the multi is forced asf like the 1st capped words reaching to met up with that same syllable count you was just breaking to meet up.. 

All in all its a good rd.. 

I just have my winner with a better rd.. 

sickest, i can see your pretty rusty. a lot of half baked ideas in rapid fire, without any real structure. i'd focus on cleaning up your bars and focusing on the punches, which leads me to 

ruin, you've got a real nice style in this. the flow, with the inner rhymes, was really nice. i love the concept in your opening punch, although i felt you lingered on the adjectives 'pick, steal' i mean, it probably could have been worded better. your ending was pretty funny too, albiet, not the most creative. 

i'm giving this to ruin, he really had the better verse in every way, but i'm interested to see what sickest can do when he shakes off the rust. 

Sickest sounded like he was gunna have a huge multi syllable set up and punch there. But it just kinda fell flat. Ruins stone clothes line was something i haven't read before in an opener. Fairs in