SMAAACK.

Venomind the rhyming was all over the place. There wasn't much structure to your verse. Your punches didn't make any sense.

"M MOVN WEIGHT. Call me SURE-LOCK.......HOLMS" ??? Why? I don't get it. Sherlock used drugs but i dont think he moved weight? anyway your punches didnt make sense and you didn't fill in the box. Overall your verse was weak. Sorry if that sounds harsh but it's facts, i can see u doing better than this. If u need help as in feedback hit me up or anyone else.

Different child. Your punches were basic too, smoked like a blunt? Come on!!! You've been here for a while i know u got better shit than that. Anyway u did enough to win this shit. Fairs in. Z

Geez I'm rusty. Let me work on getting my rust off.

Venom, rhyming was pretty decent but you should only capitalize the parts that actually rhyme.

Different, I didn't feel like you had say the flow of Venom as everything was just very basic. Little bit Dr Seuss style. However, you aimed your verse at the opponent more so you edge the battle.

Okay, so, here we have a case of someone who's incredibly simplistic Vs. someone who needs work in just about every area possible. Venomind, you structure was poor because you capped words that you didn't need to. Caps are meant to set your rhymes apart from the rest of the bar. You capping just about every other word threw the flow and focus point off throughout your whole verse, never allowing yourself to get into any kind of momentum or formulate a punchline. Plus, your material itself didn't translate well as a battle verse because there were no punches or clearly developed ideas. It was simply aimless rhyming, or not rhyming half of the time. Child, your verse flowed better because you rhymed better than your opponent did and stuck to the basic laws of structure. I would have liked to see you mix in some more creative rhymes, but I understand you're rusty. Fair is in.