LETS GET IT!

Good shit

Yeh my verse 

my fuckin eyes

nek dnt use those brackets please!

Overall dope opener, could have had better multis tho, a lot of your multis were off syllable wise but like the wifes rives bit had 9 syllables while the one following it had 11. so you gotta keep a watch on that.

tyrone i think i have already given you pointers for you verses in the past gotta incorporate them man this one was no different too.

holy fkn shit nek kutta u brought only ya Agame again and damn that spit put jus about anyone 2shame, increadible metaphores and wordplay, multis and hard hitting punchlines that i personally really enjoyed mad respect mafucka, tyrone personally i was feelin ya bars bro with nice multis punchlines and creative word use i feel it will go unappreciated cause u failed to cap ya rhymes man and had poor structure, no hate fv BSA

fair is tossed no hate fellas I thought one took this imo. both could have came better here tbh both need to step up there game and focused on punchlines more