have to give this one to Dimentor his verse was more creative overall but still KING dropped some nice stuff 

FV

This is a hard battle to vote on because I get the distinct feeling that neither battler's first language is English. The rhyming from both was definitely off, not to mention that absolutely WTF closer from Dimentor. However I think KingVA's verse was more 'literate' and that's why I have him winning. Fair's in.

ku battle

That's the way dimentor

I'm leaning King's way for a couple of reasons. Although both of your verses were similar in style, I feel King executed his ideas much better than Dimentor. Dimentor had clear technical issues throughout his drop, like his choppy schemework. Almost all of the multies (or capped rhymes) had some sort of wording issues. EX:

Making suffergate under rate wait till u scribble then SPIT IN THIS SLATES//Like a hoe da couldn't get a man bait u r starting REGRETTING THIS DATE//

To avoid wording issues, make sure the multies are all the same syllable-count (SPIT IN = 2 syllables, REGRETTING = 3 syllables), and also make sure they rhyme. Since "Spit In" and "Regrettable" don't rhyme at all, it would have helped to not even cap them. Capping them added to the multie, which made the multie choppy and uncoordinated. Just an example.

KingVA

+ Structure

+ Schemework

- Concepts

- Punchlines

Dimentor

+ Structure

- Schemework

- Punchlines

- Concepts

Dam die on grams (diagrams) is probably the worst wordplay Ive read bravo fam bravo...that ain't easy to do....King VA It not like I didn't get your punches the excuction was poor example: Punch send you up up away... landing on MARS UPON YA ASS  bad tho its played You could've flipped it something like

Y u Actin Tough Knowin These Punches Will Leave ya in a DRUKEN STUPER AND my Uppercut Can Send "You Up Up Away" Since u Think u FUCKIN "SUPER-MAN"

It not the best but any thing better than what you put..

Dimentor no one should make you feel like PEDO  seriously..some niggas might give him the auto win for that alone...poor excuction it's your problem too Hoes da can't find Man bait bar oh could've been way better couldn've flip it some like 

Like a Woman that goes to dinner with Hannibal Lector your REGRETTING THIS DATE

Both you need to push hard to get creative out comes on punches both had good concepts imo but didn't execute them good to Dim fell by the waist side torwards the end...And the opener was horrificly bad(is that a word) like foreal /King VA you got  the vote but had Cringe moments too just not as bad tho btw don't do wordplay like that ever again it's like lying in a casket  and closing the doors on ya self...high 5 for you guys keep spittin...