#savage

I'm leaning CakedOut's way for a couple of reasons. Jay, your drop wasn't bad but it was too basic to compete with your opponent's. Against a regular or novice emcee it would have stood up, but two syllable rhymes are a thing of the past. And even if you did manage to pull off a two syllable scheme, the punch associated with it would have to be pretty clever, which (to be honest) yours weren't. With a verse lacking in punchlines, coupled with the fact that a few of the schemes you did have were choppy because of rhyming and wording issues, makes for a verse that appeared to be lackluster, especially stacked against an opponent of CakedOut's calibur. Caked, nice response, but don't slack off in your bars thinking your opponent is weak. I've seen you drop much better material. But I digress...your verse here was enough to get the job done. Fair vote is in.

Rhyme wise i felt Jay improved by leaps and bound as far as putting in the effort is concerned, as for the end result most of his intended multis do not have the same syllable counts at all unlike how cakedout's verse had which were pretty much perfect and smooth. thats just the rhymes part.

as for the content, caked out had it hands down all the way, with that rabbit bit which was pretty much the BOTB for me.

i sugges jay tries studying cakedout's verse and tries implementing his techniques for punchlines, wordplays and other stuff for getting better.

much better from jay big step up from where u were at bro cakedout mad drop brus fv BSA

Caked out easily got this with superior flow and harder disses,

but this line should have been” but you been threw more shit than a FAGGOTS DICK”

Wasn't feeling either verse much tbh but I felt that cakedout had better rhyming and punches. JayHess needs to be a bit more careful when counting his syllables. Fair's in.