Expos - 

a merry cunt = american

united states as in independent from his body

ghouls love death

mules are generally sterile and also known as beat of burdens also hybrids of a donkey/ass and a

horse helly copped turds = heicopters

helly mean from hell and the stomach/guts/intestine stuff ends up as turd

overrated=over rate ted

moderate turd = moderator also guts asked me to battle him thru this account of his

ted is a movie starring mark whalberg whose part two was hyped but flopped so miss the hits

all the best guts! :)

PUNISH SHIT

PUNISH shit

nickel gets this win. i feel a few multis unlike normal were stretched. punchlines and metaphors were impressive. not as much wordplay like normal either but creativity on pont.

korvus you keep improving nice capitalazations. good setup for punches just could have been beeter hit if reworded. wordplay didnt see much and kind of played idesas. keep working gb

I felt Korvus was ahead mostly on multis, but also had just a bit more complex rhyming. Specifically, the multies were where Nicklesh clearly lost, so that's what I'll focus on here.

Korvus's multis all matched up as far as having the same number of syllables, and also going through each syllable rhymed in order. This is what separates a genuine multi from a complex assortment of single-syllable rhymes. Nicklesh, many of your multies had a different number of syllables. For starters, everything else aside, this is a sign they don't match perfectly. Always try to have the same number of syllables. Also, even if they have a lot of sounds in common, these have to be in the same order. For instance, "would mortify the ghoul/dude's sterile in the juice". The first and last syllables match, but "mortify the/sterile in the" only properly match up with the 'the's. Try to make sure every syllable matches up (or at least the stressed/important ones plus the majority of unimportant ones).

Nickleshanadan did actually have a bunch of very solid multies, I just wanted to give a specific and explained example of where there were issues to justify why I voted the way I did. Sorry if that sounded a bit condescending.

not condescending at all bro, infact thanks!!

nickleshanadan's "Reppin:" says he's from India, and it shows. I don't mean to sound racist in saying this, but there was a Hell of a lot of stuff in this verse that just does not work to American readers, and probably not to any readers outside of India. I don't know if this is because you have a strong accent, because English is your second (or third or more) language, but wordplays like "a merry cunt / American" and "helly copped turds / helicopters" don't even sound quite the same both ways to my ears, much less sound like anything that anyone would say in normal speech. So, I'm sorry to say, this verse gets a very low rating from me.

Korvus, your verse was more comprehensible, but I still thought that you were dropping some objectionable stuff. Mostly the closer... I get it bro, I know who Terry Nichols is, but how many people are going to remember that name offhand? Especially considering that LB users are an overwhelmingly young crowd, and probably most of them aren't old enough to remember the OKC bombing (I wouldn't know Nichols' name myself if I didn't have a strange fascination with mass murders). Please try to put yourself in your audience's shoes more in the future - your ability to get votes depends on it.

But I have Korvus winning with a more understandable verse. Fair's in.