Leaning towards Nikatine, both had broken multis and some played material but I think that one edged it just with better setups and structure to his verse. Not bad conceptually Nikatine, but your set-ups could be better if you just put a little more creativity in them. Broken multis are a no no too, you been here long enough to stop doing that. Zpicy, same thing for you - you had some material that has been too often said, w/ some broken multis too.

Good-luck fellas, fairs in!

Wow !!!! This was tough to read both need to step it up to a whole other level this was some pre-historic type whiz from back in 98 or summat .... ok let me hit you with the basics DONT CAPS LOCK WORDS that don’t rhyme .... why are you emphasise these words with CAPS LOCKS if they don’t mean shit ???? Secondly learn what a structure looks like we work to two lines = 1 bar pretty much these means in your two lines you should stay on the same topic or concept don’t be throwing in a 100 different references this then makes the reader think your a  psychopath because you can’t keep on topic lol!!!! Thirdly learn some battle basics all the tools you need for a good text verse .... MULTIES, PUNCHES, METAPHORS, SIMILIES & basic English skills are essentials .... good luck keep practicing !!! .:X:.