You took to long and i aint drop a battle in the exclusive arena for a minute .... Get back to it ASAP fuck a blind drop ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-11 04:47:50

X most verses i read from you maintain good flow but you lack in the heavy punch count department.. You usually hold a rhyme scheme for 4 lines and your final line of you rhyme scheme is usually your only creative line.. Provide a set-up as well in the previous line of the final line of your rhyme schemes for harder impact.. Also fix up some wording problems and be more smooth...... Ill Reem - Cap your multies.. Also provide 3-6 syllable multies and set up your punches with more wittiness.. Also find some fresher concepts to use cuz imo concepts are the foundation of an excellent.. Take a look at some battles from RULE, DaDDiO and reEFer... Overall this was an ok spar.. Voted: X-Calibur: 5 / :
Posted on: 2013-06-12 06:08:44

Landslide victory here, although I've seen better from the winner. Forced wordplay and some really bad execution at times. Loser needs to cap multies and enhance their rhyme scheme. Pm for further expos, tips, or advice. Fairs in Voted: X-Calibur: 6 / :
Posted on: 2013-06-12 07:16:01

one knows their way around tha text box lil more. reem u might want to read some battles ba doper battlers then get back to this shit.. holla at me for some assistance tho. X wasn tha best but wasn tha worse. u seem to never jus push tha card and show me sumn saucy from time to time.... haha. THV Voted: X-Calibur: 5 / :
Posted on: 2013-06-13 00:25:02

the guys have above have summed this up pretty well. in short, Xcal this was below ur normal standards with nothin really stand out. punch strength was lacking along with any real creativity. the concepts u did use were a bit hit n miss. reem actually had the smoother read but wasnt throwing any punches. up the aggression next time. votes in Voted: X-Calibur: 5 / :
Posted on: 2013-06-13 00:42:52