there. this is for the last league spot so experienced voters only would be great. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 11:12:26

Im a little out my element but I just came straight forward wit it...No hate votes please on this wild card round! Respect to my oponent............. ..VICIOUS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 12:38:32

lol, i was feeeeling that romney line, whole verse had swag. grief as usual.. Tain: you need some work on concepts, like the fortune cookie close... WAYYY to simple, mix it up up with some complexity, a different structure (imo) and starting on fresh grounds will help you out majorly... fvs in low-high Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-16 14:05:16

fv Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-16 14:22:22

one got out shined here,. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-16 17:49:14

good advice Mind Fuck, I am way out of my element with the text shit. The format, the structure an how to get non verbal bars across is not in skill set. But Im gonna build it up for sure. Good battle Grief and good luck in the tourney dog Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-17 00:58:54

Good Battle, One Had More Heavy Punches. Fair Vote Is In. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-17 02:20:12

GOOD: Opener was cool.. "gay contortionist" line was ight... "stick to my guns" line was crack. liked the concept you brought there... Closer was ight. Liked that you come consistant and was throwing punches line for line.. The "stubborn" line was def your best one.. Overall just have to step it up punch factor wise.... Tain: Opener kinda mehh. Not too strong of a punch or a concept, And it was stretched a lil bit.. lol like the plays on his hygiene and the way he looks.. Not real strong but it add humor to your verse. Like the Piranha's Teeth line also... "birth control" and "fortune Cookies' concepts could have made for dope punches, You def have to add in some more creativity there... Reword the set ups of them so they are a lil smoother and come off strong against your opponent.. Votes in.. If there are other battles needed votes, be sure to post them w/ a mention in my FVC thread. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-17 08:17:25

good from both Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-17 13:00:21

easy vote, one had the edge Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-17 21:45:09

It's hard for me to be generous with the losers score, it's a wildcard & he chooses to cruise. The winner was witty I wouldve worded a few things differently but then they wouldn't be yours. The concepts were the freshest I've read tonite and so u get the highest score I've given so far a generous -> Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-18 04:02:55

EHH.. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-18 09:07:27

Fair vote. Consistency > Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-18 12:29:10

Good: His name is Mitt Romney......just as a heads up, you all sortsa micks'd up. Concepts are nice and fresh though, good ish. Tain: Text is a whole different game than audio. The whole thing has to be more complex. People have time to read and digest, unlike in audio where you have to write things people can understand instantly. All in all good shit fellas but one has more experience in the realm. Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-18 12:36:48

Grief that was pretty solid. Tain I feel you were outmatched here tbh Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-19 08:46:34

hands down this guy won it!! fairs in.... Voted: GOOD GRIEF / Tain
Posted on: 2012-06-19 11:16:42