vicious vocab (& tugloc too) read battles of established battlers such as: DaDDiO, Row, Lockhart, Manhattan, GOOD GRIEF, Rhetorik, OFFIE, Bav, Phracture, Phroxen etc.. to get a much better understanding of how to write battle bars and how to strucutre your bars.

Yo that's real talk

I meant then not the lol

Tugloc had some nice bars

Maybe vicious foll your box rather than line by line

Oh alright any tips to get better? I thought my lyrics was better then his what was wrong with mine?

i didnt evan look at wat he battled me with. negative energy feel me

Well... this battle is a better one sided strictly basrd on sheer content. If you are dumping more punchlines than the other MC you are more likely to hit a bar or two that'll give you the victory.

In this case, that is for sure what is happening.

Vicious vocab a bit better but tugloc takes this for more attacks for longer punishin

Tug Most def got the W on this one wasn't much of a battle but someone gotta win and he at least put the effort in to fill the box!

I do quality over quantity but yeah your right l I've only been rapping for two months just grindding, and yeah I 100% need to get better, and worth harder, and tugloc this was pretty fun, good job.

lol sorry for my spelling errors I type really fast 

u really think i;m fake home boy lmao. i'm a fuccen HAil Mary fuccen spiritual nite mare. ha ha ja ja.  the CHOSEN EAGLE BABY. TRUMP ELON MUSK AND EMINEM AND 50 CENT KNOWS WHO I AM BOY. STOP TALKIN SHIT AND UNDERSTAND THE FUCCEN FACTS CUZ I'M A REAL ASS THUG LUV MAC 10 HOLY AUTOMATIC MACHINE

I'm not trying to be mean, but I think I'm a better rapper then you, and yes I think you are fake . . . Jk, we're both okay at rapping, I should've added  entendre's and metaphors, also the "this is war no peace" is a reference to the book War and Peace