PINK BACK IS AUSSIE SLANG FOR A 5$ NOTE

"I walk through the fog where echoes scream—time forgot me, but the shadows remember."

The fog symbolizes uncertainty and fear, while "echoes scream" implies that past voices or memories are trapped, crying out in the mist.

- "Time forgot me" → Suggests being abandoned or erased, like a soul lost in time, unnoticed by the world.

"You talk tough? That’s cute, I laugh" → This mocks the opponent, making their confidence seem childish

- "Your bars so weak, ghosts skip your draft" → A punchline saying their lyrics are so bad that even ghosts—who usually haunt bad writing—won't bother.

- "I freeze the mic— you melt on impact" → Metaphor for dominance. My words are so powerful they freeze the microphone, while theirs dissolve under pressure.

- "Your crew full of ghosts? Guess they passed" → Double meaning: "Passed" as in failed, or actually passed away. Dark humor at work.

- "Your rhymes like candles, burnt, done" → Comparing their weak lyrics to candles that burn out quickly, while mine are eternal darkness.

- "Cold blood, no pulse, just facts" → Claims to be emotionally detached, cutting straight to the truth without mercy.

"I carve my name—leave ice in cracks" → A chilling image: My influence remains like ice seeping into the streets."Step too close, frostbite strikes" 

- "Your whole career lost in the night" → Ultimate insult: They disappear into obscurity, never seen again.

Salute to you both, I got Hek on this one, showed his experience. Better structure and delivery of punches. 24 it felt you had some decent stuff in there but it was structured and delivered like you was in a hurry. 

so im giving this to 24, granted he has to work on a few things, i just really enjoyed the depth of his verse

^LMAO... All those expos are fucking insane, Brodie. 

Clear winner here. Loser needs to focus on battle bars, not poetry and then the need to explain every single line. If you need that many Expos, you're doing shit wrong bro. bars should explain themselves.