Stop crying over comments. 

Thank you.

Bandino - nice rhyming in the opener, the big poppa pump was a little bit predictable & I've heard it a lot before, although it might be new to you so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt on that one. 40 working overtime / back breakin set up was hard, matchmaking punch was ok. Ego lifting bar wasn't bad, closer was decent I just missed what was going on with the valure shit. Not sure if its meant to be valour or velour or if I'm missing something but the bulldog shit was a decent way to end.

Negan - Nice idea with the here's the skinny bar, it's the execution of it that didn't quite cut it for me, saying you're nearly a skeleton didn't do it justice. You can do better than "band aid" wordplay, I've seen it, it does work as a nameflip 100%, it's just a bit of an obvious one. "I STRIKE THIS WEAK CUNT, u aint NICE WITH FREES CUZZ" lol this had a WRC vibe about it, fire. Same with the heavy metal / rock band, it does work as a nameflip just a bit obvious. The closer echoed the here's the skinny bar for me, I get the links with organ/heart drain/sink but it it just lacks the sting in the way it's set up. You come up with dope ideas for punches & I think if you spent a bit longer crafting the set ups it'd deffo pay off.Bandino had the edge here for me, just cleaner throughout. Spend a little longer going over your shit Negan & be super critical, it'll be worth it.

i went with metas and complexity in punches fair vote no hate.............................

one sounds real and the other one sounds like a movieive seen 100 times

How bandino lose this. You're verse was trash negan 

Nah im not crying i take that back. But Jon Flako would like to appologize here.