not a bad start from jenkins , the flow is smooth, up to the Lotus bar it was hittin , the locust bar kinda backfires as your referin to your self buggin lol u clown after that your flow and multis fell off , goldilocks bars ? lol leave it out , i got the worcester lad taking the dub here is more consistent lands and more creative concepts , the haitain line could have been worded differently it didnt really hit but i get the angle. More advanced multi usage . FV 

Hobo: POTUS was your best bar. Solid verse overall.

X: a LOT of your multies were just rubbish.. no other way to put it. That first set was such a disaster that when I got to Apple watch I had to backtrack to see if it even worked. Then I saw "lips heeled" <-- huh? Then drivel and whilst.. this is battle rap not a dissertation.

Hobo takes this with a more coherent verse with clever bars.

Off the bat I thought Jenkins was about to bring it then got disappointed, as far as x goes, snap on ya wrist like a Apple Watch, who snaps on someone's wrist? This is probably the biggest issue I have reading peoples text bars, you go for punches but they literally don't make sense, like yea Apple Watches can snap on a wrist but as far as you to him, you're snapping on his wrist? Feel me? Also gonna have his lips healed? lol is that a attempt at filler for a bar, just rhyming random shit? I don't hate it's never been in me but both need work and I encourage you both to send bars 

Dude is bogus...lol first one I believe . It's all good though

CALIBUR wond in all categories.

LIPS HEELED, BAITED as really imma just ‘mall this cat, Dog!’ Like a SPRINGFIELD HAITIAN.

^^tight

no hate stay up

I'm confident I'm making the right choice. Both did well in my opinion I feel one flows better tho

i got hobo taking this one with stronger punches fair vote no hate.........................