i like the chimp hair bar...nice. i havent done this in like 20 years...whats with the bold letters and stuff? is there a certain way to write shit out to emphasize on something or? im a bit confused on how to write this shit out...can any1 help a computer illiterate man out? please. ANY pointers will help. otherwise...good battle...i think u took it.

The thing about reading is you just follow the words and sometimes they lead somewhere and sometimes they don't, like this one time I was sitting reading a battle on letsbeef and I was like.. "the thing about reading is you just follow the words and sometimes they lead somewhere and sometimes they don't, like this one time I was sitting.........." fv as always. 

cool. appreciate the feedback. ill just see what happens i guess.

Hek got this. Environmental you gotta fill the box & properly set up your punches, don't rush. You got ideas, now practise your rhyming & your punching. 

ANY and ALL feedback is appreciated. Thank u

Evo had some decent ideas in here just lacked the creativity to bring them to life into good punches

Also didn't fill the box, try to work on creating impactful punches from you concepts and utilize all the space your given in the box

My winner did enough to edge it but could have been easily beaten 

Fairs in