Kinda an odd one here. Both had reall nice ideas, ones worindg wasn't there and the others seemed to be missing something.. 

Phrac: feeling pressured due to pinatas is a reach for me, it works one way but not both... no ones feeling pressure to hit a pinata... the ending punch was dope, feel it could have been set up better though, even the set up was decent but it had few issues... 'pressure to spill bodies' seems to be ther cause it rhymes and connectes to pinatas, though pinatas should have been the main focus of that line with a better rhyming connectiong leading to the punchline as, again... no one is 'under pressure' hitting a pinata... "the body of the pinata is under presure".. only makes it worse... However, creativity and complexity was in your bar and overall it hit well. Not a bad bar, used to seeing stronger bars from you though. 

XYZ: You entire bar is connected and is one piece, i rate that highly when it comes to bars and one bars especially... random set ups to a one liner punch is nonsense in one bar battles. Woriding is a little weird in spots, makes the readibility awkward and stop at certain points. The ending punchline was fire though, dope concept. Feel the set up let you down here. Also, feels like there's something missing... its almost as if the punchline is a set up line for a punch. Concetputally it was really nice, but the wording and delivery/execution of the opening/setup wasn't up to par with the punchline. Again, dope punch and dope idea, needed more in the setup to be a smooth, hard hitting bar. 

Two great writers here, both with the skill set to knock the other off their game any day of the week.. kinda feel both rushed their bars here, the concepts are there and they're strong but the delivery & execution of same was lacking on b oth sides, something i've not seen that often from either.. My winners bar hit harder overall and was better thought out. Best of luck to whoever goes through. 

Fairs in, I'm out. 

Decent wp with the names from both dudes here and equally measured , i just feel like Phrac got more work done with his two punch combo that went hard yo . Fv nice round 

Hmmm.

Phrac: It was the wording and the odd multies here that just didn't do it for me. Once I got to "pressure to spill bodies" I was like.. wait, what? What was the first damn multi? It was just too clunky, dude. Then I saw "XY Chromes" and that just didn't sound as good as you thought it did. iono, man.. decent bar but there were just some hiccups in it that I didn't fuck with.

XYZ: "bargain on over thread"... uhh. Even after reading your expo, which I usually never do, that still doesn't make sense. I get it, but again, this is something that's just awkwardly worded. Now your end punch - off rack & colt/coat was fire. Loved how simple, yet effective it was.For those reasons, I gotta give this one to xyz. Good luck to you both.

Overthreaded clothes are cheap, 90% off rack... DPShit

POETS!!!

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Guess I should expo that setup... bargaining for votes = his voting thread. Thx for voting

I enjoyed Ex's 90% line but I feel like the build up was lacking. Phracture hit harder here and utilized the CC efficiently. 

This was OK seen better from both, but feel one had the stronger concept fv as always. 

This one was great. I almost instant voted exwhy on the 90% off rack concept but decided to read over a few times. 

That XY chrome line is the turner for me. 

I'm edging this to Phracture since that Pinata line was sweet and he had the connected multis. It kinda looks like 3 lines vs 2.5 (218 vs 177). 

Really nice by both though. 

Nice one fellas, i've seen this voting angle against phrac a couple times or imagining things but I like the way it was written. I felt phrac's bar was a lil heavier. Nice shyeet. 

ExWhy Chromes for Smoke/XY Chromosomes?????? Dear God that's awful. 

Phrac def did his thing.. arms reach related to piñata and child birth but also a gun bar concealed large heat and idk if I'm reaching but hair pin triggers can relate to piñata as you don't necessarily require pressure to let it off but if pressed sure to spill bodies. I think it's extremely layered but I could be wrong