i got r2ba taking this one fair vote no hate vote back he was more complex..............

Have to give this to rite, feel wording was better and had stronger concepts, wording needs worked on both tho, fv as always. 

Cool on both sides, roam started off nicely building up to the postal creep line, won't lie I never watched the Gustavo shit you was talking about, so concepts like these are risky. The pauper/Talk is cheap/Absolete is nice af. the whole bible/papal concept was done nicely. RBA started off slowly, you know the school concept is overused, the Scottish bag pipe shit was nice, the movie concept punch was dope, definitely wish you coulda set it up better, "your vision is like a movie that no one will clap for" ? I get the vision part connecting to the "you won't see that scene" but "no one will clap for" ? coulda come up with something, overall not a bad verse but I seen better from you.