Quick expos:

Story of Hansel and Gretel

Nat is Scottish, Gordon Ramsey is as well.

furnished his bunk, as in, made his bed

everything else should be obv

GL HF

Good battle gents. I see one is improving which is a win in itself. Still needs to up some of his battle elements such as expanding his multis to a greater length, setting up some his punches a lil cleaner and executing harder concepts. Some solid lines from his end, no doubt. Winner seemed more advanced from start to finish. Had some nice lines in there as well. Stay up

Both verse were good, but I'ma go with Nat on this one. Both had good metaphors, creativity was there, rhymes schemes were on point I just felt that Naj edged this one..his verse was indeed better

Better structure took this one. Roaming see how nat structures his 16? He has good flow. And his rhymes are 5-6 syllables. If you could do something along those lines and not cap words that don't rhyme then that's a start. Your verse was kind of hard to follow at times but you had decent ideas.